/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>3883530
this could have been mine a couple of years ago.
a couple of thoughts:
the shading on the stairs don't make much sense, also avoid phantom-shading/tangents (her figure breaks the shading on the stairs)
it looks like the fire is the biggest light-source, but there seems to be a bigger light-source outside of the frame - you should keep it simple (pic related)
speaking of the fire, use some occlusion shadows on the big bowl, the underside is way too bright - again the fire has no impact.
foldings look ok
draw her fingernails
nose is too small, either drop the nostrils and make it more anime, or make the enlarge the nose, it doesn't work right now.
what's the deal with the last tiny step? it makes no sense.
you can change the composition simply by cropping image, there's much dead space here.
finally I'd suggest to wrap it up already and move on to the next piece.