/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>3063762
Never thought I'd redline but I had to offer some advice.

With figure drawing I always start by identifying the center curve of the spine. Everything should be curved and twisted farther away from the viewer.

I'm not super into the box method because it doesn't make for naturalistic figures but I tried doing the box thing to show how such a pose would be pushed and twisted.

It's hard to get that eye-to-hand skill, so if you did this on a sketchbook while looking at the image on a screen I don't really blame you. Good start!