/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>3972744
That's cuz you're copying the Loomis head. The whole concept of Loomis (and various other instructors in the way of construction drawing) is to build things out of solid 3D forms. You can modify and stylize these forms to look any way you want.
Remember, plenty of Japs learned via Loomis Method™ too, so it's not dear old uncle Andy that's the problem, you just aren't applying your knowledge right.