/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>2977452

Hey dude. I just noticed you didn't get any feedback on your piece so I'm posting a little overpainting. Sorry for commenting so late into your image making. Maybe you can use this advice on your next thing.

You need to start thinking of your work more in terms of planes. This is something you should do right away when you're starting your piece. Always wrap your strokes around your forms.

I changed the mouth area into something a little cleaner. I'm sorry but that zombie-ish texture you had is just somehow visually un-pleasing and way too busy.

You shouldn't go into texturing before you have all your shapes and value structure done. My overpainting was done in about 10 minutes so it's not perfect or anything but I think it illustrates some of your problems slightly.

Your monsters bone anatomy doesn't read well either so I recommend looking at some actual animals like crocodiles and even illustrations of dinosaurs.

Hope this helped. Keep up the good work!