/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>4975857
Its not 100%, but i tried to fix it under the assumption that the corner is symmetrical. Keep track of your vanishing points and check you construction with ellipses when you're unsure. Also don't jump into values before deciding on a light source, the lighting in this is all over the place.

Honestly, scrap the whole background and do a new composition. This one just looks weird - why are they in the tiniest corner when the room is (assumedly) so big? Why the focus on one corner? Why this unequal spacing of vanishing points? Try to think of what you want to communicate:
Power, the one guy winning, competence, might -> 1 point perspective
battle, movement, decision, change -> 2 p
one guy towering over the other, fear, empathy -> 3 p