/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

I don't see any reason to shit up the board with a new thread and didn't see anything else relevant, so I guess I'm posting here.

How's the perspective on the various people in this room look? I'd like to make sure that everyone is in proper places before going any further. I think the guys on the far left might need some tweaking, but I'm not sure.

if someone could redline any suggestions that'd be peachy.