/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>3659874
Make the clothing slightly transparent. If the light is coming from behind then paint that area of cloth with some light bleeding through and indicate her legs inside. Also the wings, and edges of the hair could have some SSS. The green balls are too uniformly arranged. Some should probably be partially occluded by the red clothing. Here's a quick example, i also added some hair flyaways that would be present even in a braid...you could experiment with the amount to your liking. For the clothiing i just did a 70-80% opacity layer set to luminosity with the local color but desaturated and whitened, then i blended the inside edge a bit. For the wings an overlay layer thats the same color as the wings but reddened and brightened a bit