/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

Anonymous Wed Dec 24 20:56:07 2014 No.1926306 [View]
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>>1926168
Linework is good, anatomy too. Composition and motion, not so much.

>>1926216
The one on the left is good but the neck is too long/stiff shoulders.
The one on the right has too much contrast, no mid tones.

>>1926293
Design is nice.
But you need a sense of motion.
>>1926301 The perspective lines are breaking it.
There's no interaction with the environment. It looks like it's just floating there.

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