/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>2257477
Hi, I'm the one that posted the pictures- not OP. The sunflower one was just a spur of the moment one so didn't have any major plans on that one. more after advice on the second one with the blue dress. Yeah i'll agree with the critique that i winged it most of the time, however this was mostly just a practice in a style i wanted to try. also, not sure if you know this, but shoujo means girl in japanese. perhaps i should have specified. shoujo-manga style. Please see pic for reference to the style. If manga style is not something you know much about (for example, that proportions WILL be off because its considered distorted- especially the head and eyes) as for the dress, i left that till last since i wasn't sure on the style i was going to do. However for you to say i'm "not good with anything" is not helpful and frankly, quite rude. as is calling a drawing "fucked up" especially if it follows an unrealistic style.
Though i wish i were better at drawing flowers..
Also, i'm not a man. I'm a female, and i'm 20. not that that should matter.
Pic related, head to shoulder width is distorted in manga and anime style drawings.