/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>3370092
I guess you're still new because of chicken scratchs and the lines are very confident just yet?
The thing about draw hair in clump like that is you have to know that it's still hair whether it's in small or hair clump. As for how to know, just apply physic and draw more hair from references.
The face is okay but still need some refinements.
About the right shoulder, it's more wide than the left one. Unless you're trying to foreshadowing it, they should be the same length.
And if you trying to foreshadowing, the shoulder height usually should not be the same.