/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>2767893
The most apparent issues are your lack of 3D understanding and measuring errors - many of these have simply inhuman proportions. I know it is said that gesture drawing is to be "on the spot" in terms of capturing a pose's feel, but that is all thrown out the window when you aren't drawing what your eye is seeing.

They are also flat. No amount of drawthrough will save it if you can't wrap your head around drawing "inside" or "into" the canvas. This is somewhat evident in the way you depict ribcages - the same way at every angle.

What I P R O P O S E is to drop human figures for a while as it may be too complex at your current state. Run through KtD, do all the exercises (with extra focus on their measuring exercises), and give Drawabox a go. It'll click. Once you've done those in a competent manner I would try figures again.