/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

what do when brain start drawing dicks bigger than the things they're going into

also lol before anyone makes the joke i jus realized the back of the hood looks like a fuckin face voldemort style

>>2884195
as wonky as the anatomy is in this i actually love how insane you made the pose, it's got a really fun impossible flow to it, i bet (or at least i hope) you had a lotta fun drawing that. might i suggest adding some more lineweight variation to it if you plan to take it further? could really help add to the dynamicism and help direct the action/movement/flow through the piece more effectively

ooh also her left arm/hand/gun (our right) is a bit lost in the silhouette tho, i'd suggest trying to make it more towards the viewer/in perspective more or pointing it in such a way that the arm is able to be read more clearly

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>>2882705
wowowow, the style of the original had me already (i'm a sucker for blocky designs) but the critique made it great, also learned something here too, danke