/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>4026302
did a little overpaint for some ideas. i think the guy's eye socket shadows should only be on the face that's in shadow otherwise it's kinda like goggles. they look wrinkly with all the bags under their eyes so i'd keep it to a light weight line, hatching was a little weird on the eyebrows going that far over the "keystone". added a tiny shadow where the sternocleinomastoid splits into two at the bottom because the neck shadows felt unbalanced. the muscles felt really heavily shadowed and i'd have to look up anime ref of how they do it for men, i'm sure it could be designed better. might be better off with no shading and just indicating smc by line from collarbone to 1/3-3/4 up the neck

on the girl changed the lips a little because the highlight on top was really distracting. the shadow shapes in this one are a lot more appealing but looks a little too baggy under eye for my own tastes. raised the collar shadow a little.