/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>2662289
Holy shit that's a hell of a response. I'd be lying if I said I don't feel a lil failure right now with how quick and easy you did your sketch. But shit happens. I've looked up some reference and did some thumbnails early on based on chef clothing, but I wanted to integrate a knight fairly well with the concept. So he has a satchel for travel, the grate sword actually has a sharp edge all around it, and he has a metal breastplate that is themde to a chef's uniform. But I think I will take a few notes from what y'all have suggested, I'll try reversing the position of the satchel (like you have) to get rid of some of the crampness. I gave him a short sleeved shirt underneath the breastplate, which I'm now seeing was just lazy, so I'll give him the rolled up sleeves like you've suggested. Please ignore the shading though I knew it was real sketchy, I plan on erasing it. As for the pans, (seeing how they are non-stick) I should add some kind of strap, his supposed to have one on each shoulder but the sword is blocking it. I'll have to find a way to make some straps that blend well. In one of the thumb nails I did give him sort of a apron, but like I said before the idea is more around a knight that is chef themed. So I guess his a lil more knight then chef? I'm gonna experiment a bit more with this drawing, then I'll probably do another with more focus on similar shapes like you've suggested. To be fair my thumbnails I used for this were copy and pasted from one thumbnail which I was satisfied with and then edited. I see now that it's biting me in the ass. But once again thanks man for the outstanding advice and response!