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I am not good with words.

I moved the eyes higher on the face relative to the nose.

I added additional volume for the skull to change the head/face proportions.

I redrawn the nose and mouth, and change the line emphasis on the eyes.

I feel like you wanted to simplified the nose but want to keep its shape for some reason, but you end up with a large cartoon nose that doesn't have ala... I am not sure what you are going for. Are there an artist that you wanted to draw like? What are you going for with this character?

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