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try to blend the skin more, it's making the surface appear too rough, instead of painterly
she's got a bit too much chin for Jessica Rabbit, her jawline and skull structure is making her look like a man in drag
ear is a bit too cartoony for me, no detail whatsoever, looks like a pixar ear (pic related), ends up clashing with the rest of the piece
I like the texture on the dress and gloves but her hands don't have much detail, try adding some folds in the gloves, definitely refine the hands a bit. If she's putting a lot of her weight on her left arm, try making it look like it
bunny ears are a lot more closed near the head, and usually furrier

otherwise good work, with a lot of drawings here it's that there's so much off that you don't know where to start and you end up ignoring people, or sending them to /beg/. I think you have a clear path to making this better and that's because of the base you have already, keep it up

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