/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>2284175
>>2284175
I don't get it, the orange light is supposed to be coming from a creepy room at the end of the stairs, yet the stairs go on beyond the door? Has this character just been passing through a bunch of these orange lights on his way up?

These stairs look pretty open and not very creepy, and the way you made the wall on the left looks like we are seeing the protagonist trough a door...

Also, the two lights are distracting. Where we supposed to be afraid of what is around the corner? Because it doesn't work if the protagonist has a light that's so bright it illuminates the entire stairway. Sure, we still don't know what awaits us in the orange room, but it doesn't matter, because the stairway is so well lit it makes us feel safe.

You have been working on this for too long, it has been what? A month? Two? Is this something you want to finish or it's just to study textures? Because it's taking too long, and the atmosphere is kind of weak... I would suggest you move on, do other shit, then come back from scratch on this stairway thing with more experience and some references like this under your belt maybe.

Here is my take on it nobody asked for, just because