/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>3043952
To take 3D render passes as comparison, you only seems to use the "rim left" one. It all feels very flat and lacks shadows and reflections. Consider studying those, it helps a lot in improvement your shading.

One other problem I see way too much Is that you put an highlight everytime there is a line. Stop this, that's not how it works at all, you're just repeating errors of others.