/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>2579395
The head on the left is turned around 15 degrees to his left, so you would see slightly less of the left side planes of his face. The face you drew isn't turning along with his head. The problem with the face on the left is that the eyes aren't inset correctly on the head. You can work that out by figuring out the structure of the nose bridge as I tried to show. In both drawings, the cranium should have slightly more mass.
Did you intend to deviate from standard proportions? I understand if you went for more heroic proportions with a smaller cranium and a larger jaw. I'd suggest that when you're trying to figure out construction, you should use a consistent set of proportions so it doesn't get in the way of identifying what's wrong.