/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

1: I was warming up and this head came about so I tried to think about the planes from memory
2: I retraced my sketch with adjustments to see if it looks alright
3: didnt like the planes i drew around the nose and nose in general so tried to think about it
4: readjusted the nose based on new info from 3

It looks a little strange but its all made up on the fly to get something workable so I'm not sure if somethings greatly off or its just shoddily thrown together bits, Could be the neck stuff too as i just threw it on to try get rid of the disembodied floating head feel.

Any ideas lads or am I doing alright, fresh pair of eyes someone elses take on it would be great.