/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

1h. Going-to-bed-sketch. Fanart of the witch from the old Moomin cartoons. I think I'll do proper fan art of her soon. It's so relaxing to watch dem Moomins when the world is going to shit...


This is really cute and comfy! I really like the idea too. My feedback would be:

- Try doing the same piece with a perspective grid so it feels more like the characters are actually sitting in 3D space. You've done a pretty good job with the animal but the girl feels kind of flat in comparison. (I should have taken my own advice as my own portrait is all fucked up now that I look at it)

- Do a separate T-posed sketch for yourself where you figure out what she'll be wearing. You could definitely get a nice result with what she's got now but I think you could push the design just a little bit more.

- Get some reference for her pose. Just take a photo of yourself or someone else if you can.

You could definitely just finis this piece as it. Just something to think about for the next one!