/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

A late night Cowboy wip, experimenting.

>>6494257
>>6494502
Thank you! <3
>>6494674
10/10, I Love this. You perfectly captured them, I love their attire, especially his helmet! I love how you can always from a quick glance immediately know the personalities of your boys.
>He looks like he smells like meat
Your not wrong, he's a carnivore alright.
>>6494723
And I love your beautiful blue gijinka man, he looks like a Hindu God.
>>6495276
Thank you! and the feeling is mutual, I always Love seeing your pieces!
>>6495357
AGRESSIVLY GRABBING THAT BOOTY! I love him, I wanna play and twirl those beautiful, luscious sideburn of his. Also love how on point his outfit and the gears he carry around.
>LOVE YOUR BOYS ALWAY
Thank you for loving my emotionally and mentally unstable boys.

>>6496701
>>6496725
>The sketch became the lineart and stayed as one layer throughout
I see no wrong in this, exactly my work process.
I do have one question, are you, yourself unsatisfied with your own work flow and results, or do you want thing to look ''cleaner'' because only of outside opinions. Since there's nothing wrong for a piece to have strong or heavy lines. I do think your art has a lot of charm, I really like the bunny guys hair. Of course you can always improve thing like anatomy, gesture and so on. But if you want more cleaner/confident lines, I'd recommend practice line weight, avoid re-drawing lines atop on each other, just do one line at a time and connect them. I also recommend you to to study folds, right now they feel a bit randomly placed, try draw the folds more softer/lighter since it feels like they take the focus away a bit atm.