/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>6677079
I really don’t wanna be one of those “I fixed ur art” fags and I know you probably heard this a million times before, but I feel the line quantity is really dragging down your line sketches. When you’re inking I think the contrast of black lines and white backdrop necessitates a subtler approach. Erasing a number of overemphasized muscle/tendon/joint definitions helps the form look more organic (imo).

I’d also work on the wrists a little bit, a design of toes/fingers that doesn’t look as flat, and I think some gesture would make it look more fluid (i.e. calves tend to have an outward sloping curve).