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Looks great, but it'd be better to give (back) some detalization to the trees that are to the left to the center of the picture. At the center, you have a tree that is slightly darker than the ones surrounding it. The further away is the object, the less dark it is (because it is more obscured by particles that are in the air). I propose covering the furthest trees with some haze, same for the ones at the top of the mountain. Finally, the snow looks too realistic compared to the road. I think you should improve the road too. If it is paved with asphalt, then add some noise (spaced) and blur it with the distance (might be worth it to try this for its whole length, including the closest part).

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