/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

Hello /beg/, back again this time with some dudes. Planning on studying some actual anatomy soon.
>>6992320
I like your redraw of top left's body better than the reference. The other ones could use better attention to detail. Line up your copy in front of the reference to see what was off about what you drew, then try and fix it.
>>6992323
I'm not sure what the benefits to simply drawing boxes is. Try applying perspective to a real piece such as a cityscape, you'll still be drawing boxes but with more attached.
>>6992352
I like it, personally I think more (fine) detail to the hair would elevate it.
>>6992397
Cool style, because the butterfly creature is small in the composition I would add less detail to have it read better, I'm having trouble interpreting its details/face looks messy.
>>6992402
Needs more contrast.
>>6992407
Rendering is nice, hands and feet need work. Don't hide that foot!
>>6992409
Excellent.
>>6992411
Your proportions need work. I recommend mirror flipping your drawings or using a grid until you get used to making things symmetrical. Do not blunderbuss the smiley.
>>6992464
Line work needs better consistency. Just a matter of more practice.
>>6992475
That hair is off to me. Muddy coloring and texture I think.
>>6992487
Some proportions are too wide I think ie neck, ribcage/pelvis since go hand in hand, waist. Makes head/shoulders feel frankensteined in. Linework is excellent however, face is cute. Draw foot coward.
>>6992498
Kawaii.
>>6992501
Nice. Keep at it.
>>6992538
Good studies.
>>6992611
>>6992640
I like it. I think you're on the right track. Things of note: shoulders are different lengths, try for cleaner more consistent linework ie hand, consider different rendering techniques on clothes to convey clothing texture, maybe more expressive eyes too.
>>6992667
I can feel you getting better every post.
>>6992669
Always like seeing your stuff. I did draw for the skull thread, I can probably draw some more for it later.