/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>4019605

Well, I decided to give it another try and change up what I was doing. Just trying to use the guideline of "less lines" to try to lead me in the right direction since I'm obviously not good at picking them yet. Maybe some of these might be like what you're talking about? It's hard for me to say. But some of them just feel incomplete.

I've had someone tell me I shouldn't disconnect lines, and I feel there's a lot of that here but it's mostly a result of running out of time. I accepted it in pursuit of the other goal.