/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>2318488
dude was hired for his creative skill, not his technical, he's more into character/fashion design (key word: design) than illustration, it's why he always has goofy ass motifs, like giant zippers early on in the KH series.

also
>Only because he's famous does not mean he's good.
you want to use "Just" in place of "Only"
the form of "only" you used there is singular and more declarative, accusational, you'd use it more like
"you ONLY care about Nomura because he's famous"
where as with
"JUST because nomura is famous, it does not mean he's good"
make's a more general "third-person" statement of "fame does not always equal skill" which is an undeniable fact, while also implying your opinion that he is not good

but yeah, good job on learning another language, that shit's hard, other than that one lil slip you're doing really good, that said, i still think you're wrong and have a shit opinion GETREKKEDSON

>>2305513
all three are me when i feel "done"