/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>3144787

Take this redline with a grain of salt, largely doing it because I like the drawing and thought it'd be fun to add to (with the added benefit of helping you out, potentially).

If there's anything beneficial I have to say, I feel like you could make this drawing stronger by establishing and reinforcing more of a focal point, and by paying closer attention to negative space.

Also that bottom hand is hard to draw holy shit.