/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>6978192
very very nice effort, good colors, good clothing, nice eyes and hair...
the problem is, you can't really tell what she's doing, like climbing stairs with a gun and a cigarette and that weird grasping pose on the left hand? There's also a lot of clutter with the stairs, the bike blending with the gun, patches, wings and all, with the dynamic pose added on top it's kinda messy. The eyes really save it though, very nice focal point.
You have taste for "Cool" things, you just need to put them together in a more thought-out and tasteful manner. I'd call this piece done btw, it's good, go next