/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>4551934
like i said is not a golden rule, i should have said eye sockets because if you are not familiar with the eye structure you can take the middle of the eye when a eye is not completely open making it even below the center specially if its already below the center, then again it's not a golden rule but it doesn't vary that much in most cases.

now you need to be carefull when you are copying someone's style since you are not the person itself, so you will have to build a library of his works and analize what are his normal proportions and find a middle ground, because they wont keep always their own proportios 1:1, so you need to find that middle ground as a base.

anyways the face itself has bad proportions like the angles of the eyes/nose and the jaw being a box emphasizing that large head even more, her head plate looks like is pressed agains her forehead making it look like a flat surface, add the hanks partitions? starting too low it gives the impresion that her hairline is way too low, they don't have the form of hanks that start higher making that big head look even bigger, her sides bangs do the same making the problem worse, look at the way he draws hanks of hair they start higher.The one in pink (top) it should be more or less the form of these hanks on that hairstyle, you can feel the form of the hairline where they born and they have a more natural uhh form , the second i did below is what happens when you draw on an already big head hanks of hair way too low and without the form of them starting higher, add making the sides thinner and the top of the head looks larger, this is obvious on how it should be done in MO.


also the nose should be more pointy on its total area if that makes sense, yours look more like a small 3dpd nose pasted on an anime face.

the guy has a lof of heads in that angle and you couldnt check them to make sure yours wasnt bad? seems to me you are just lazy or retarded for not making something as simple a that.