/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

Can I get some crit? Want to make sure its not off here before I clean up/color
>>7056724
I'm beg but from what I can tell
- You're not going dark enough in places (the ear, the middle of the torso)
- You're not following the shadow shapes super closely (center chest, left arm, bottom of torso etc)
- Your brush is pretty smudgy, assuming you're trying to recreate the texture but maybe try laying in with a more "basic" brush and then adding texture? again im not a good painter

can I get some crit? still rough but want to make sure its not wrong before I move onto cleaner lineart/coloring