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Ok I've never done this before but here's a couple of things that I noticed.

Try to make the bottom stick out a bit more. Right now it feels flat and like its receding into the picture in a kind of weird way. You should be able to draw a sort of C-shape vertically down the middle of her torso, from neck to crotch. I also made the hips a bit thicker cuz that's what I like ;)
Do a bit more to show the volume of the breasts, they feel a little flat as well, and I'm not talkin bout the cup size
It feels like the head is too far back from the neck. I tried to outline the skull and it looks like the neck connects to the jaw or does a 90 degree turn towards the base of the skull.

I hope some of that made sense. I like the face and the stylized fur.

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