/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>2848883
off the top of my head

- she should be looking down, but she's looking straight ahead instead
- 90° angles at the elbows, big nono
- too many straight lines in general
- bad construction for the pelvis and thighs
- foreshortening of the hand is bad / weird
- weak shadows, weak light source
- not a full figure
- lazy drapery