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>>1500551
The pose doesnt really make sense. Here's a quick redline of the same-ish pose but a bit more realistic. Not saying its perfect but its a bit closer to what the pose would actually look like.

You need to do a ton of gesture drawings to get your proportions down, with that chicken scratch its obvious you completely guessed the form one small line at a time. Practice doing quick poses composed of circles for the ribcage, pelvis and head.