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>>4044103
Umbrella in the top right doesn't mean anything if you don't give us a preferred lighting direction. Light from top left would cast the umbrella off the right.

If you take light coming from top right, almost behind the camera, you might be able to get the top of the torso covered with cast shadow and leave the lower half/legs in the sunlight, which lets you show off body curvature using the hard edge of the cast shadow. Personally I think this is more interesting.

Pic slightly related as example.