/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>7019834
Ok. What if I kinda expand and rotate her slightly like this, and then adjust the tail and helmet like this? Not sure how the skirt would deform, but since this is still in early stages, I'm willing to give everything a couple cracks. Ive done drawabox and dynamic bible along with my friends, I can do the assignments in isolation well, but cant bridge the gap unless I actually do pieces like this (which is retarded, I know). Basically, I found that I learn better by just drawing what I like and getting feedback, doesnt do me much good to do it the other ways