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>>4800250
I think this one is an improve already, it feels like it's coming forward because of the weight in the feet and hands

pic related I had a go but turned slightly - front-on gesture is difficult to capture.

The feel the form things mostly comes with practice sorry. I'd also suggest for a more academic approach doing some research into 'contraposto', it's a concept pretty closely related to gesture and has to do with shifting the shoulders and hips slightly to improve appeal.

Vilppu might help you (try video course thread) but personally I learned by just doing loads and figuring it out