/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>7129144
Kind of, yeah. In the work that's out now I was originally had a different plan for what happens in the climax, but he suggested something better so I went with that. There are also smaller things, like for example pic related is a suggestion he's made on the current thing I'm working on. I'm not going as far as he suggested, but he's right in that the mouths could use more detail, so that's what I'm doing now. He also asked that I add an extra couple of pages to a later sequence.
I bring him the work, he makes suggestions that he thinks will make it more appealing or might be a better direction to take it, and it's up to me to decide how to implement that feedback.

>>7129146
Yeah definitely.

>>7129154
Believe it or not I'm not going to break contract just to get feedback on it, no.
>The image you keep pretending is yours and OP are completely different in style
Well yeah, the two drawings have a completely different intent. Not to mention that there's years between them.