/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>4489875
Some tips for you Mugi

Eyebrows are too thick which gives her a more masculine feel, same goes to the large mouth with the lips. Contrary to popular belief males can also have big and thick lips but generally having a bigger mouth is considered to be a masculine trait. Hair a bit too confusing too, this thin bobcut gives a more simple appearance.

Eyes are bit wonky, usual the upper eyebrow sits on the top outer corner if one looks straight at a person, on your it feels like she is looking upwards bu the position of the head and the eyeball does not.

Overall yours does have quite a feminine appearance but it has some minor uncanny feels around it.

Here is my quick attempt to change it as I said.