/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>2426940
Heres my take on it. Take it with the grainiest of salt.

Your animation looks like one movement; with a lack of action and reaction. The Male's pelvis is driving the force. So the female should react to the male's pelvic movements. The female will move when the male finishes his forward thrust. The female's arms, and legs, should follow her body as it reacts to the male's pelvic thrust