/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>4125410
>>4125598
Thank you for the comments. I'm afraid I don't know anything about Ambient Occlusion and I'm about to look up some information about it, so I don't know where you want me to add stronger values to make it more readable. I'm also not sure where to start making the hands and face more legible besides drawing over them on a separate layer with a rough outline to cement the forms without breaking the silhouette. I was just gonna jump right into blending the values and making it read better from there. Pic related, but I wasn't content with the process and decided to try again but apply all my knowledge of the female anatomy of the torso to the painting on a separate layer to make sure I know what I'm doing.

>>4127642
Look up various references close to the ideal image that you want and use those to determine whether of not you think it's passable. In my opinion, I think the right breast is too stiff; I'd draw it conforming around her torso in order to show off how soft they are. In addition to that, I'd like to reccomend using a soft contour for the areola's edge closest to the sternum, makes the juggers that much more appealing.

>>4127637
Hampton's course on gesture drawing supplemented with the drawabox courses could help with construction and making sure your forms are drawn proportionately and accurately, imho. It'd help to learn that so you can start drawing your Korean cartoon shit after getting proficient enough.