/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>2770366
I looked up your DA, ex-sodom. I'm a fan now, but it looks like you're just getting started. It looks good, but like everyone here said, you're lacking fundamentals.

Anatomy is good to study, even if it's going to be stylized for your work. The same with gesture drawing, as some of these look a little stiff: NSFW 004 Ranko, for instance. Are you referencing off of anime stills, or a program like Design Doll?

From what I see, you're also lacking followthrough. Lots of sketches but nearly no finished work. You need to finish works or else you'll never get better at finishing. People aren't likely to pay commissions for sketchwork.

Likewise, most of what you posted lacks any kind of background or interesting props. The female figure is great to look at, but you'll need more than that to draw the Patreon bucks. Tr doing some practice with planting your subjects on a flat plane, or across a bed. You don't have to render the backgrounds yet, but it'll go a long way to making more interesting drawings.

I suggest checking out one of the NSFW boards (Likely /e/, from what I've seen of your stuff) and posting some finished work in a drawthread, maybe taking some requests. It doesn't pay, so it goes against what you'll hear from other artists to never do free work, but you'll build up fans, experience working towards a defined goal, and that will motivate you to work on finished drawings.

Now that I know your name and can recognize your work, I'm expecting to see more. Good luck, and don't forget to study. (PS: Signing sketches and studies is considered tacky. It doesn't stop people that want to steal it, anyway.)