/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>2338922
>>2338924
>>2338955
First of all, if you're asking for crits, do everyone the common courtesy of flipping your image and making sure the page is placed flat, getting rid of the useless background would also be appreciated. Best option is to scan, of course.

I'd say you have a lot of work ahead of you in terms of measuring angles, negative spaces and proportions. The wrong direction of the folds on the boy's shirt also indicates you have problems with perspective.
You might benefit from altering your workflow, starting by sketching out a very simpified but proportionally accurate frame and then moving on to details.