/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

had posted in the previous thread about my situation and pic related

does anyone have any basic tips for the anatomy here? like is there anything i'm really really missing so far? obviously the feet and the other leg arent finished but there's something weird about the arms. i'm also pretty bad with hips and this is my first time trying to be ambitious by emphasizing them.

i'm thinking i should make the jacket arms a bit puffier and i need to fix something about the right hand(her left hand)

i'm kind of forcing myself to draw through a dry spell of absolutely nothing being accomplished. work kills my energy so i feel like doing nothing all day and even when i try to draw i get autistically frustrated and give up.

pic related is me struggling to finish something that i had doodled a while back. i've decided that if i keep stopping after being upset about how a piece looks, i'll never get anything done. so i'm just trying my best and hoping i'll learn from it. blease be gentle