/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>4216094
sorry for repost from alt/stylization thread, here's some parts where I specifically went back in with the 0.7mm:
- Heavier lines in folds of cloth around armpit where sheets overlap, and also where the arm exits the sleeve I have the bicep insertion/drop shadow thicker
- Also right under the collar where the pocket of the shoulder pulls the shirt down it thickens for just a bit
- Barb on the anchor is made of two parts, one cylindrical (main body) and one flat (barb), where the two come together I extended the pure black from the hat's drop shadow deeper down
- Where the bangs are close to the face I leave the line separating the two pretty much constant width, when the two separate in space at the chin/jawline I thicken it up a lot
- Kneepit is a crevice
- Left thigh into right glute is a crevice, very dark
- Intersection of two cylinders for anchor stem/base
- left lines for marking off shaded areas in the shirt broken to keep them very light
- Also pretty much anything on the leeward? shadowed? idk how to call it side has thicker line weight.

There's probably a better guide for this, I remember someone saying you're supposed to darken closer (to the camera) lines and lighten further away ones and I keep forgetting that exists, also you're supposed to do something for parts under tension but I forget what it is, someone's posted the guide on /ic/ before

hope this helped