/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>2336036
Please don't listen to this anon >>2336048 , he's clearly retarded. Anyone who says "read this" with little to no explanation shouldn't be allowed to provide feedback. The image shows a nice gesture with proportions that are really spot on. Line quality is great, but the shapes aren't describing the motion.

If you're the anon from earlier watching Hampton's videos, you should watch how he tries to create his figures. He makes the gestures around the boxes, then starts placing everything together. Try making the gestures with the boxes in mind. He even distorted the boxes to his liking because he's trying to Study the model not Copy it. Do No Match The Model, that isn't the goal. It just looks like you're trying too hard to draw like him. When a person is standing straight, he tends to mark his boxes at a 45 degree arc. Measure it if you have to. You're doing fine, keep at it. Good luck!

>>2332936
2 years sounds about right. Learning How To Draw which is basically all your fundamentals, then another year after that to find your style. But it's to common to see someone start and give up half way in their journey, only restart a year later.