/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>4365063
Good attempt! Now here is my small critique + edit. I got rid of the bump of the bottom of the ribcage because it seems to be causing some confusion, and to be honest, it's not that sexy. Keep in mind the anatomy when you are rendering. It seems that you may have been trying to shade in abs, but 1) that's not where they are located and 2) without additional shading on the other side it just looks like a random lump. Also keep in mind contrast and light source. You have these light shadows all over the body but this intense shadow on the upper ribcage - ask yourself why? It is a relatively flat plane, not counting deformities. Also don't forget your hard edges!