/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

When I posted the original sketch in the last thread, some anon told me I was shit and that I should give up forever. It was my first time doing a full illustration, so it was more than a bit discouraging, but I powered through. Well, anon was right and it was pretty shitty. So, while I'm by no means a cham, I've decided to push myself a bit more and practice lighting and perspective with more gusto. (Now choosing a cohesive palette can come next, looking at my terrible color choices now.)

Thanks, asshole anon! You've inspired me!