/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

Keep going with the WIP
I'm not feeling very good about the background, any help there?

>>3421114
Thank you anon
>>3421136
Yo right, my bad

>>3422440
Nice drawing, biut you could get some soft edges on the clothing. I'm also diggin those rocks. That texture looks sexy

>>3421815
That's dope. My only complain would be his chin. He looks like he has no neck

>>3421907
The composition doesn't work very good, and you had it pretty easy with that topic. You need to get a focal point and draw around it. And you can still make those random adds, but they should head to something.

>>3422457
Are you using a tablet without pressure? Or you don't activate that on the brush? You should

>>3422553
Man, that was a nice drawing, but that refined rendering doesn't work for me. It's pretty uncanny

>>3422727
Doesn't matter how many particles you want to add, that piece is doomed. The composition is divided in three point totally appart. Try to work with two points and work with them to play with each-other in some thumbnails. That's the main problem. The colors look fine, maybe a bit too light, but if you add some cast-shadows as the other dude said, it could work. However, I recomend star again

>>3422810
Cool. Wanna see the finished version

>>3422871
Fucking love this. Blog please