/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>3878662
Thank you, anon. I have one here
https://nessiefynn.tumblr.com/

>>3878704
Thanks for the feedback, I decided to try and touch up the face, does this look any better?
>Are you indo
I have no idea how you deduced that, but yeah. What gave it away?

>>3878693
I think you should pay more attention to the way faces are constructed in animu, and try simplifying the face shapes a little. This witch has a very round cheek, but a very angular chin. I feel like this is a stylization I see more in western cartoons than I do in anime, where the cheek and chin are one, unified shape, with no defined cheekbone. I think the same could go for the shape of the mouth, which has a lot of little details to the shape that don't really add to the expression. I think that it would be stronger and more anime-ish looking if you tried to make it a simpler, more confident shape.